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[-] PapaStevesy@midwest.social 19 points 4 months ago

Needs a punchline. That last panel is completely pointless and wastes a good setup imo.

[-] Chestnut@lemmy.world 23 points 4 months ago

I think it's fine as it is. It's trading funny for poignanncy

[-] PapaStevesy@midwest.social -1 points 4 months ago

Except the last panel isn't poignant either. Like I said, it's useless. It would be just as poignant without it, and if they had actually written a punchline, it could have been funny too.

[-] Knock_Knock_Lemmy_In@lemmy.world 1 points 4 months ago

You have a point, the last panel adds nothing. But for most readers it doesn't make it worse.

[-] PapaStevesy@midwest.social 1 points 4 months ago

But it doesn't make it better for anyone, and it does make it worse for the rest of us, so...

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