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What if its all a lie? poem (lemmygrad.ml)

submitted 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) by JaredLevi@lemmygrad.ml to c/comradeship@lemmygrad.ml

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We are all soldiers pre-manufactured, asleep in a psychedelic liquid, fractured. Awash in false memory. To one day wake full of righteous anger toward our enemy, built to hate the systems embedded within us. Assembled, with a destructive lust to live only in our dreams.

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[–] JaredLevi@lemmygrad.ml 2 points 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) (1 children)

Totally based in material reality—maybe I just didn’t write it well enough. Thanks for the critique. Edited: This poem is about waking up to the contradictions of capitalism.

[–] sovecon@lemmygrad.ml 3 points 2 months ago

Ah ok. I didn't get that haha.
I hope you don't get too much vitriol from the comments lol.